Saturday, August 4, 2012

Kony 2012

 Kony 2012, the viral video should be shared by everyone  around the world to make Joseph Kony famous. First of all, if you don't know who Joseph Kony is, he was indicted for war crimes and crimes against humanity by the International Criminal Court in The Hague, Netherland. He is also accused by government entities of ordering the abduction of children to make them into child slaves, and child soldier. Do you still not want to make him famous and not let everyone know what kind of crime he has done?

 To start with I strongly agree, that people should make videos about him, and make Joseph Kony famous, because everybody should know about him, and know what kind of crimes he has done. For the past 20 years, he abducted children and made them into child soldiers and child slaves. Would you want Joseph Kony do this crime and make Uganda children SUFFER?! Also would you want him to keep capturing children to make child soldiers?

 Moreover, Joseph Kony was indicted for war  crimes and crimes against humanity by the International Criminal Court in The Hague, Netherland in 2005. Do you still don't want to let everyone around the world know what he has done? He also made the child soldiers kill their own parents, and neighbors.This was happening for the past 20 years, do you want this to happen again? If we don't stop him now, he will make 1,000,000 army of child soldiers and make Uganda children suffer and their parents suffer, too. On November 12, 2006, Joseph Kony met Jan Egeland, the United Nation Undersecretary General for humanitarian affairs and emergency relief, Jorneyman Pictures released a interview with Kony in 2006, which he proclaims, 'He is a freedom fighter, and they do not have any children in there group called LRA(Lord Resistance Army). Do you actually believe this?! He was already accused by the government entities of ordering the abduction of children to make them into child soldiers!

 Finally Joseph Kony should be famous around the world, and make videos, because the world should know what he has done, like he has abducted children to make them into child soldiers, also he did not just abducted children, it has been estimated that he abducted 66,000 children and made them into child soldiers for the past 20 years.

 Now how the critics are saying that Kony 2012 video shouldn't be shared around the world, I disagree, because as I was on the video Kony 2012, he abducted children and made them into child soldier, and child slaves. Why don't you want to share the video around the world, when it's already a viral video?!

 These were all of my reasons why we should make Joseph Kony famous, because the world should know what kind crime he has done for the past 20 years, and because the people  should stop Joseph Kony  abducting children, also lastly because he should be stopped making Uganda families suffer. For more information about Joseph Kony's crime
please watch the video Kony 2012 billow this argumentative essay, and also share this video as well GO! GO!

1 comment:

  1. The essay is powerful with a great introduction. Next time, please do not write in all capital letters, however. The essay flows well with good transistion between paragraphs.

    Try to improve on the rebuttal against those who disagree with you. Keep up the good work!

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